My main concern is whether there is a concrete/clear illustration of my passion of communication (in addition to acknowledging its importance.) And whether this writing sample makes sense in response to the prompt. And of course any other thing that should be perfected. ANY comments are welcomed and appreciated! Thank you!
PROMPT: Is there something you love, have to do, can't stop thinking about? Write about a personal passion or obsession other than visual art or design.
Communication
The successes in my life are the results of acknowledgements from others. Not only were the people supportive of my motivations, but their words were the keys to my motivated attitude. The gestures of communication- whether it's through text, physical forms, or technology- plays a dominate role in my life as each step I take are influenced by these messages given and received. As a result, I am passionate about communication.
Mothers all around the world communicate to their children in different ways of love, expressing their support and showing their encouragements through language and physical gestures. As a child of many doubts, my mother has always communicated important messages to me. These "important messages," in her belief, sets a mental foundation in my life. Consequently, I can grasp onto these messages whenever I am doubtful or vulnerable in addition to her communicating with me on a daily basis. She has showed me that communicating to one another has the advantage of telling others what is on one's mind. More importantly, telling others that they are cared for.
My passion for communication has helped me understand myself in addition to learning about other unique individuals. As many ways of communication are given, graphic design fits into my larger obsession with communication. Graphic design is a great tool to expand ideas in addition to visually communicating messages to the world. Not only does it offer opportunities in marketing, but conveying crucial messages through visual communication. As a student who is passionate about giving out the right messages, I hope to gain knowledge from the excellent school of design to achieve my long-term objectives as a visual communicator.
