where I go to seek my inspiration.
where I'm heading to seek my inspiration. :)
I am interested in a future in which I am able to further research, understand and work with the human body and I believe that Queens University will provide me with a paramount education. For me, Queens will open up a world of possibilities and present me with many obstacles in which overcoming will bring me closer to my ultimate goal.
I feel it is better you mention a particular area in Biology that you need to study at Queens and elaborate on how Queen's curriculum can help you achieve this goal.
My time at Queens will not only expand my knowledge of the human body,
This idea you tell repeatedly and I think that disturbs your smooth flow