beingryanjude 2 / 1 Oct 14, 2008 #1I drafted up this short answer essay. I'm wondering whether it is decent or not.I am not involved in every club. But I am passionate about each activity which I am apart of. In my school's drama program, the Opening Night Act, I have had the opportunity of playing roles on stage as well as off. Last spring, during our production of Bye Bye, Birdie, I challenged myself with my first on stage role-Mr. Johnson. Upon acquiring the part, I discovered that this character would not only act, but also sing and dance. As the rehearsals progressed, I found myself quite tense and nervous about being in front of an audience. The ONA assisted anyone who struggles. Teamwork was very abundant. Eventually, I found myself even helping others. This is not like all other activities out there. The ONA is different. We are like a family.Input would be great!
EF_Team5 - / 1,586 Oct 14, 2008 #2Good afternoon.I am not involved in every club, b ut I am passionate about each ...As the rehearsals progressed, I found myself quite tense and nervous about being in front of an audience. The ONA assisted anyone who struggles.Condense these two sentences into one. Teamwork was very abundant.Good work.