collegebound28 13 / 22 Sep 30, 2016 #1Hi, I am applying to the Peace Corps for education and it would be great if another set of eyes could check my resume over for clarity as well as spelling/grammar! Thanks so Much!EDUCATION EXPERIENCEEnglish Opens Doors Los Lagos, ChileVolunteer ESL Teacher April 18 2016 - November 26, 2016 | 35 hours per weekPlanned and taught ESL to students ages 14 to 18, emphasizing speaking and listening.Managed classes ranging from 10 to 23 students with a variety of English levels.Engaged students through interactive classroom activities to increase both student motivation as well as speaking and listening skills.Developed and implemented activities for after-school English Club to engage students outside the classroom.Worked with a Chilean teachers network to develop English activities in the community.LANGUAGESFrench: FluentRelevant Coursework:201 Intermediate French I202 Intermediate French II300 Practical Oral Expression300 Practical Written Expression300 French Grammar300 Study of Contemporary French Life300 Study of Literary Texts301 French Comp and Conversation302 French Comp and Conversation II376 French Literature after 1800400 Practice Of Creative WritingSpanishSpent eight months living with a Chilean host family, in a Spanish speaking community with few English speakers.EDUCATIONState University of New York at New Paltz New Paltz, NYAugust 2011 - May 2015B.A. International RelationsCenter for Applied Linguistics Besançon, FranceSeptember 2014 - December 2014Study Abroad: Courses in French society, culture and language.VOLUNTEER ACTIVITIES / INTERNSHIPSBideawee Animal Shelter Wantagh, NYAnimal Care VolunteerMay 2013-August 2013 | 40 hours per week during SummerCarried out daily maintenance tasks to ensure cleanliness of the kennel.Adhered to health and safety standards to ensure health and well being of the kennel.Old Sturbridge Village Museum Sturbridge, MassachusettsMuseum Education June 2016-August 2016 | 40 hours per weekCreated an interesting and exciting environment for visitors to learn about 19th century life.Responded to visitor questions about demonstrations and exhibit space.Work in village farm gardens and carry out weekly cheese-making demonstrations.WORK HISTORY West Babylon, NYF.W. Sims HVAC ContractorsAdministrative AssistantSeptember 2015 - April 2016 | 40 hours per weekUsing excellent grammar and spelling skills to type communications with customers and vendors.Multitasking in a fast paced environment to carry out general office work and provide support to other departments.Responsible for stocking office supplies and organizing materials to be sent to field sites.HOBBIESKnittingGardeningEmbroiderySewing
ichanpants89 [Contributor] 16 / 777 309 Sep 30, 2016 #2Hi Danielle,It is nice to see a thread that is quite different from others. I would like to try my best to help you with clarity, spelling/grammar, and proofreading just like you said earlier. You can see them in the detailed descriptions below. I hope it would be helpful. :)- ... from 10 to 23 students with a variety ofvarious English levels- ... classroom activities to increase bothstudents' motivation as well as ... (the word "both" seems stand alone. it is better to omit it.)- Developed and implemented activities for after-school English Club activities to engage students in learning some activities outside the classroom.- Worked with a Chilean teachers (if it is plural, the usage of article "a" is unnecessary) network to develop ...- Responded to visitorvisitors' questions about...- Worked in village farm gardens and carrycarried out weekly cheese-making demonstrations. (this should be in a past form right?)However, I have no idea why in the last work history (September 2016 - April 2016) you omitted the time signal or you didn't use past tense anymore. If it should be in the past form, perhaps these modifications would be helpful.- UsingMaintained the usage of excellent grammar and spelling skills while typing to type communicationscommunicate with customers and vendors,- MultitaskingMulti-tasked in a fast...- Had a responsibility to stockResponsible for stocking office supplies and organizingorganize materials to be sent to field sites.Cheers :)