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People have their own interests, and strengths and weaknesses - UIUC entry essay


rinheo 1 / -  
Oct 25, 2009   #1
People have their own interests, and strengths and weaknesses. We usually think of these strengths as special gifts and develop skills. And I think I received that gift for good at counts and matter of economy.

When I have enrolled in high school, I attained puberty and worried about my future so I decided to work for find my innate ability. During the summer, I started to work at office for arrange files and other chores. The works were totally tough to me and these were not a simple works; however all staffs knew what and how they should do. Each of their group was perfectly organized and cooperated well. It could be reasonable because they work like this way everyday but what I thought more prudently was they have obligation of their act.

The purpose of starting this work was just makes some money, but I learned more important things than earning money and I thought this was good occasion for find my interests. Then, I was convinced of my future what I should do and should be. I promised myself that I will make my own company. And I really want to start my step of my dream in University of Illinois.
urbuddy542 2 / 4  
Oct 25, 2009   #2
And I think I received a gift for good at counts and matter of economy.

Fix middle paragraph and last

i think u need to address what you learned and this essay appears to be one of those you simply change the name. show the admission office why will uiuc business help you and what do u intend to do at uiuc


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