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There is a person I treasure more than gold.. Describe your mother (about 100 words)


Btram266 1 / 1 1  
Dec 12, 2015   #1
There is a person I treasure more than gold, appreciate more than God and cherish more than my life. She is my mother who has a great influence on me. The best thing she has done to her daughter is showing me what compassion is. My mother owns a warm heart that can easily be touched by th miserable. She told me giving is happiness and forgiving is healing. It was her words that killed all my selfishness. Besides that, mother is the one who make me love myself. She always praise my attempt and forgive my mistakes. She has become an eternal power of me. Thanks to her, I am growing up better.
vangiespen - / 4,134 1449  
Dec 12, 2015   #2
Hi Tram, I edited your work. It is now 100 words and ready for use :-)

There is one person that I treasure more than life itself -- my mother. Being a compassionate person with a warm heart, she has always influenced me to do what is right, give happiness to other people, and that emotional healing comes from forgiving. It is her unselfish love that taught me to put others before myself, but that I must love myself more than other people first. She is the source of my eternal power because she forgives my mistakes and praises my attempts and accomplishments. My mother is the reason that I have grown up a good person.

You can use the above statement in its current form :-)
OP Btram266 1 / 1 1  
Dec 12, 2015   #3
@vangiespen Thank you so much for helping me with my work and that's really meaningful. ^^


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