Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences
With intense concentration, I lunged forward, my adrenaline rushed along the lively tempo. A sense of accomplishment swept over me as I pushed my embouchure to the limit, alternating between the lowest and highest range through sections of treacherous key signatures. Suddenly, we decrescendo into silence. Enjoying the low brass's warm timbre, I reminisced of the past eight weeks.
Pit orchestra scores are never re-arranged to conform to mediocrity. Every day, I came to practice, determined to overcome the challenges that Broadway musicians have also faced. Pit orchestra has helped to foster me into a solid and more confident musician. The valuable experience not only introduces me to a new area of music but also has taught me that music, like people, has limitless possibilities. My inner world is expresses by music. As my playing improve, I must also improve myself, so that my music shall expresses my feelings and character. (151 words)
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