My interest lies in medical or biomedical sciences, but my goal is med school.
Maybe instead of saying "but" you can relate your interests to your goals. Talk about how OSU would allow you to pursue both. Anyway, I liked your essay, it shows that you know the school well :-)
even if you're exploring what you want to be. This is why I am considering The Ohio State University.
You might want to put a colon there instead of a period, just throwing that out there.
Cincinnati and even Ohio; that is until I
"Cincinnati and even Ohio--that is, until I"?
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