can some one please help me with this :
here is the question : Reasons for choosing your program and Waterloo (*Required)
Please tell us about your educational goals, your interest in your chosen program(s), and your reasons for applying to the University of Waterloo.
My educational goal is to Undergraduate programs in Kinesiology: obtain a degree in Bachelor of Science (BSc) Honours.
I have chosen this program, because i want to be a Athletic Therapist or a Physical Education Teacher. Sports have always been a huge part of my life. Since I can remember, I have Always been involved in some sort of sport. I played on many high school teams, and decided to do something related to sports. Kinesiology is the perfect program form me, as it will provided me with a fantastic scientific background and the ability to critically analyze and decipher information. Once i obtain my degree i hope to get a job in the athletic therapist field or apply to teachers college to pursue my career as a physical ed teacher. After graduating from Waterloo, I will be the first in my family to gain a Bachelor of Science degree. With a Bachelor of Science, I will have many options available to me in my career.
The University of Waterloo is a famous top ranked university in Canada. Recently Maclean's magazine has once again recognized the University of Waterloo as having the best reputation of any Canadian university. Waterloo is a dream school for me, because it meets both my academic and athletic needs. Waterloo is not only known for its academics, but also for athletics , both which are really important to me as i will be running cross country/ track for Waterloo while doing kinesiology.
could some one please edit this and help me out in making this better as it is very important for me. any help is greatly appreciated.