With globalization, English has become the universally spoken language. Therefore, I strongly believed that it would be to my advantage to learn as many languages as I could to achieve the status of a global citizen. For that reason, becoming fluent in three languages (Turkish, English, and Spanish), is a personal achievement which I am very proud of. I am proud of this achievement, because it did not come easy for me. I was obliged to work hard, as well as take time away from other preferred social activities. During this process I learned that the more I know about different languages, the more culturally competent I have become. As a result of these efforts I now have more of a global perspective on political, economic, as well as social situations. I am also able to communicate more effectively with people of various different countries and cultures because of my exploration of foreign language in depth. I am able to learn countries' values from the lack of certain word knowledge. I have traveled to eight countries and was exposed to different cultures. Though I did not speak each native language, I was still able to communicate with the natives of the country because of my understanding of many cultures, which starts by knowing different languages. I have put my knowledge of these three languages into good use. I have translated for people who have visited the United States and people who have visited Turkey. I translated everything from Turkish to English and vice versa. In fact, I have translated from Spanish to English to Turkish. Doing this required me to be familiar and aware of the cultural differences and customs. I have the great privilege to connect with others which improves my communication skills and helps me become more socially active. Translating also helps me develop intellectually. The more I let myself learn about languages the more I will understand about cultures and people.
'I have translated for people who have visited the United States and people who have visited Turkey. I translated everything from Turkish to English and vice versa. In fact, I have translated from Spanish to English to Turkish.' IMO, i dont think all of that is necessary.
try to focus on why being trilingual is important to you, how it makes you proud.
Thankk you! I appreciate your help!
Moreover , I strongly believe that it would be to my advantage to learn as many languages as I can in order to achieve the status of a global citizen.
Nice job! You write very well in English.
Now start writing in paragraphs:
The first sentence tells the idea the paragraph is about. The second sentence explains a little more. The third sentence explains a little more and maybe ofers an example. The fourth sentence might be the last sentence in the paragraph, and it should be a comment about that main idea -- like a reflection of it.
That way, your compositions will have good structure.
You'll do very well, I think!