What qualities or unique characteristics do you possess that would allow you to contribute to the university community?
"No one's fingerprints are exactly the same as anyone else's" (Virginia Satir). Fingerprints aren't the only things that set me apart from everyone. My diligence and patience do as well. When I do something I am persistent and put hardworking effort in doing whatever it is that I am doing. If a problem were to arise in a situation most people would attack it right then and there, without any logical way of handling the problem. On the other hand, I would take a step back, analyze the problem and find more than one way to go about solving the problem. I am more of a "think before I act" kind of person and this enables me to communicate and work better with others. I know not to offend others while I try to get my point across. My diligence and patience have gotten me very far and have opened my eyes to various things. Everything I do shows my hard work and effort. Every work, idea, and creativeness I bring to the table is as unique and different as everyone else's fingerprints.
Nice work; I especially like the conclusion, it wraps the essay up nicely. Good job.