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'Recycling and LOVE' - your reasons for applying to Hamilton College



charliesun 9 / 28  
Dec 9, 2008   #1
Because the character limitation is 2000(about 300 words),I just state one major reason.Please give some advice,and thanks!

I've changed keyboard into necklace,I've changed pop-can into birdseed container,I've changed juice bottle into corbeil ...Always having environmental awareness,I don't let any tiny thing around me go in vain;because I know even the worthless thing has its value,which is just temporarily unnoticed.Hmilton College's emphasis on recycling deeply attracts me.And I want to contribute my creative ideas to make it more than just recycling.Here's the way I changed a waste keyborad:I seperated keys "L","O","V","E" from the keyborad and arranged them vertically on a platform;then I put "Y" to the left of "O" and "U" to the right of "O";finally I fixed all of them with glue and attached a chain on the top---a perfect "LOVE YOU" pectoral cross was made!So I not only reduced plastic waste but also made a refined jewellery which captured plenty of hearts of my friends.Later I produced lots of copies and sold them for money,and donated the money to charity.I wish I could make a contribution to Cram and Scram Reuse Program and give a fire-new definition to RecycleMania.I wish my life in Hamilton College would be not just improving collecting rates and reducing waste but digging out all the trash's potential value as much as possible,making every bit of them reused fully and entirely.There are also many other dreams I wish to realize in Hamilton College,and I'll make them all come true if I were lucky enough to be matriculated.

edemsco 1 / 5  
Dec 9, 2008   #2
I think your essay is excellent. I really like the way u attacked the question. the introduction was very catchy and I just wanted to read on the see "What's this guy talking about". Good job, keep it up.
janaylloyd09 4 / 9  
Dec 9, 2008   #3
...SPEECHLESS!!!!!!!...THIS IS AWESOME!!!!!
getitlow 7 / 17  
Dec 9, 2008   #4
hamilton will definitely love thissssssssss !
EF_Kevin 8 / 13053  
Dec 9, 2008   #5
Put a space after your commas and periods. Watch the spelling. The content is excellent, and well-suited to the prompt question.

I've changed keyboard into necklace, I've changed pop-can into birdseed container, and I've changed juice bottle into corbeil... always having environmental awareness, I don't let any tiny thing around me go in vain; because I know even the worthless thing has its value, which is just temporarily unnoticed. Hamilton College's emphasis on recycling deeply attracts me. And I want to contribute my creative ideas to make it more than just recycling. Here's the way I changed a waste keyboard: I separated keys "L","O","V","E" from the keyborad and arranged them vertically on a platform;then I put "Y" to the left of "O" and "U" to the right of "O";finally I fixed all of them with glue and attached a chain on the top---a perfect "LOVE YOU" pectoral cross was made! So I not only reduced plastic waste but also made a refined jewelery which captured plenty of hearts of my friends...

Even though it can only be 300 words, you can separate this into 3 paragraphs for clarity.

:)

Kevin


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