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enjoy a person, place, or experience I...
^^Here the word "like" looks better.
At other colleges I have visited the students seem more intent on getting drunk than engaging in the subject matter.
I don't know if this is a good reason. It would be better if you make comparisons based only on the positive aspects of various colleges, like, the course structure, faculty, etc.
For this, I was named names.
I'd use "called" in place of the highlighted word.
Brownose, knowitall, etc. I'm sure you have heard many of these as well.
This is redundant. The preceding sentence makes that point clear.
I like your first four sentences. They reminded me of the movie "August Rush."
However, I'm not sure if the reasons you have given for attending Reed are compelling enough. For instance, if you replace Reed with the name of any other college, the essay will still sound coherent -- and that is a problem.
Which discipline are you going to take up at Reed? Talk about that; explain how it is different that other colleges.
What profession would you like to join after you graduate? Will studying at Reed give you a better platform to pursue your goals?