Secondary represents high school years, is that what you're trying to say?
When it came time for me to browse through colleges, having a strong academic program wasn't at the top of my priorities. The reason I say this because any college could meet that criteria. (don't know if I should include it or not)
I'm not sure if you should say this. Strong academics SHOULD be important to you, but I understand that you're trying to convey you were looking for something much deeper than just the average college priorities. Maybe try and reword it?
(I feel that maybe the ending is a little weak...what do you guys think?)
I think you really need to point out the SPECIFICS. This paragraph is very broad, as it says a lot of important things to you like leadership, globalization, and extraordinary women-- but why do you think this? What backs these claims up?