These rigorous courses will allow
try another word instead of rigorous to diversify
The University of Chicago provides the ideal community for me.It also satisfies
The university has had a vey successful alumni group
HAS HAD - Mistake?
also eliminate one of the mentions of the university
The university has had a vey successful alumni group with 10 percent of all Nobel Prize winners having attended The University of Chicago.
These records speak for themselves and show that people who attend and graduate from this University
become people who contribute to the world and have successful futures.
Here you are) Besides this the essay is impressive) Good luck!
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