THE OTHER ROAD I'LL TAKE - MY BACKUP PLAN IF I DO NOT GET A SCHOLARSHIP

If you are not awarded a Lester B. Pearson International Scholarship, what are your plans for the next four years?

(100-word maximum)

If I don't get the scholarship, I will be a little disappointed but, it will not be the end of the line for me. I will see if I can get a student loan to pay a part of my tuition fee which I can repay once I complete my course. Another option will be a part-time job. If none of these works out, I will pursue engineering from another university or college which is cost-efficient or one which offers me a scholarship and join the University of Toronto for my post-graduation.

Give your academic plans more focus in the response. That is what the reviewers want to learn about. It will be better to remove the reference to a part-time job since you did not expound on that intention of yours. Your response is correct and on track with the reference to how you plan to continue your education without a scholarship. Your final discussion points are also full of conviction. Making this response a well thought out and forward looking academic plan should you not get the scholarship. Change up the reference in relation to the student loan from "I will see" to "I will acquire". That way you will deliver the image of a student who will not let an obstacle like the loss of a scholarship stop him from achieving his dreams.

Thanks a lot for helping me out and for replying at the earliest.
@Holt