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Limit your response to 300 words. Reflect on your answer and be attentive to spelling and grammar. There is no "right" answer to this question.
Why are you interested in The Ohio State University?
""Scientists investigate that which already is;
Engineers create that which has never been.''"
This quote has always inspired me to think big and out of the box. Since my childhood days, I have always been intrigued about how things work and how one can make them more efficient. And to fulfil my dream of becoming a Aerospace Engineer I want to pursue this course in one of the world's best universities. That's where OSU comes into picture.
The feeling of a challenging small school environment in one of the largest campuses in the world; and the opportunity to study whatever interests me, even if I am still exploring what I want to be. This is why I am considering The Ohio State University. OSU has been lauded in the recent years for the diversity of its student body. In this way I can make myself aware of all cultures that endow this world and still feel at home away from home.
The OSU Aerospace program has been ranked one of the best in the nation. The program challenges students to reach their potential and interact with other like-minded people, while still giving them individual attention to achieve the most out of the college experience. This is evident by the airport operated by the OSU. The Ohio State University Airport is one of the leading general aviation facilities in the nation, providing educational opportunities to the university's students.
The best thing about Ohio State University is its plethora of opportunities. This gives me ways explore a newer sides of me. And as my idol Michael Collins said, "Exploration is not a choice, really; it's an imperative". The OSU is the place for me to enter the new stage of my life; full of new experiences and opportunities. For me, The Ohio State University represents expansion: a place where I can fully develop.