here is my first supplement. Feel free to give any necessary criticism or commentary.
I secretly love Greek mythology. Over the summer of my junior I was watching Clash of the Gods on the History Channel. I noticed Professor Kristina Milnor, passionately correlating the myth to reality. I researched Kristina Milnor. I was surprised by her achievements in academics and her career at Barnard College. To settle my curiosity I researched Barnard. I found out Barnard has values that do not just seek academic exploration, but personal growth. The vast subjects ranging from biophysics, music, to the classics gives me an opportunity to explore different worlds. As I am discovering these subjects, I can share my views with other passionate women. This is so important to me because I believe a college's close community enables ideas to thrive, and to turn into innovative actions. These actions can change the world, and make history. The value of determination, growth, and ambition gives me the motivation to rise up to the challenges that Barnard has to offer to me. Through these challenges I will help me to discover and grow intellectually and personally. Once I create myself, I will be strong enough to make a different in my own community.