The essay is good in that the ideas conveyed are interesting, but the language needs to be checked. I agree with Haru in that the first line is really offputting. The revision is equally bad. By saying that
Though Rutgers may not be the best choice for everyone, I know for a fact that Rutgers University is the best choice for me.
you are implying that Rutgers is not all that great a university, which no university would want to hear.
You have not specified which town you come from. Either you come from the same town as Rutgers (since you pass by the campus every day) or you come from some other town. If you come from the same town, this statement does not make sense -
My town is an average-sized town but majority of the population are traditional Indians that come from the same background as I.
And if you come from some other town, then it is always a good idea to specify which town it is.
and lovable vibe
lovable is not exactly the word to use. People are lovable, I don't think universities can be.
As a child I would constantly refrain from adapting to my natural roots and heritage,
You should also perhaps give a brief explanation of why this is so. THe last para also needs a little more explanation. I am sure just passing by the campus has not changed you into the confident person that you have become.