The school also has the phrase "take it on" all over their website so I thought I would add that in
I read your essay, Shelby. It reads quite well. I made a few corrections for you, however.
Only seven minutes away from my school, there is
a trailer that is the headquarters for the Eatonville Boys and Girls Club.
This is
a safe place for underprivileged elementary children to go to after school while their parents are either at work or are just unable to care for them
--> Third paragraph, second sentence: This sentence does not make any sense, and I was afraid to try to make some sense out of it, as I have no idea what it is you are trying to say. This sentence need to be re-worked.
--> Otherwise, the essay sounds pretty good. I would make the changes I have indicated above. Good luck with the essay!
Mark :)