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I have set foot on all seven continets! personal and professional accomplishments


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Dec 1, 2012   #1
Imagine you have graduated from Temple University. You are preparing to attend your 10-year reunion, and the alumni office has asked you to write a one-page essay about your personal and professional accomplishments since graduation. What would yours say?

I have set foot on all seven continents. Repeatedly, wiping sweat onto a white cotton towel I survived the blistering sun; while riding through sweeping savannas on majestic elephants. Star gazed at sublime stars on the driest place on Earth. Swiftly, ran through two miles of vertical hedges chasing my two kids through the bewildering Longleat maze. Celebrating a successful five years in business, employees and I consumed European cuisine at the only undersea restaurant to ever exist. On a dark night, my husband and I kayaked through the natural phenomenon of bioluminescent wildlife in the Bioluminescent Bay. Annually, I am a space tourist.

I am a successful entrepreneur and proud owner of Vicissitude, a flourishing design and development firm that galvanize creative technologist, interaction designers and engineers to develop future products and experiences. Once, I exhibit Vicissitude on the highly critical television show, Shark Tank and was offered three hundred thousand more than my asking price by every shark for only ten percent of my business. Vicissitude has experience rapid growth triggered by acquisitions, notable products and partnerships with Google and Microsoft. Vicissitude is remarkably honored for the toilet that turns human waste into hydrogen gas, the transparent toaster and for making soccer balls another source for energy.

Each year on Dr. Martin Luther King Day, I secure decent, affordable housing for families in need via Habit for Humanity. Concerned about third world countries nutrition, a donation of The Wise Company quality prepared meals are sent quarterly. Occasionally, a stranger's tank of gas, groceries or layaway items is paid for by me. At times when I want to retire from people of my age group, entertaining and providing meals via Meals on Wheels for the elderly, while being active in schools through mentorship and volunteering with local literacy programs can be quite self satisfying. One day within each month, a donation and a day of help to nature base facilities to maintain the beauty of environment are provided. When feeling extremely generous, I bring a homeless person a hot meal and a durable tent.

My family and I have been invited to the White House by the president of the United States of America to have dinner. Over a game of golf or white linen tables, warm hearted conversations have been conversed with thirteen of Forbes Fifty America's wealthiest people. For contributing a great deal to our society and the city of Philadelphia, a key to the city was presented to me by the mayor of Philadelphia. To contrast, quarterly, my family and I head back to our hometown and have a mouth watering, southern home cooked meal with my parents. Over a game of Monopoly on a tan foldable table, my childhood friends and I reminisce over the past years. For being the adoring family member and friend that I am, gratitude represented by Kool-Aid smiles, tight hugs and repeated kiss are presented.

Ten years ago, I graduated from Temple University. As I stand in front of you today at this very moment, I couldn't possibly ask for more. I have become the successful woman I've always wanted to be. It has been a great deal of experiences and accomplished achievements. I simply owe it all to Temple. Annually, I donate a portion of my company's sales to the Fox School of Business to thank them for the education I received; for Temple has contributed to the outstanding woman I am today.
kendra_kay - / 2  
Dec 7, 2012   #2
I think this is written very well, and nothing pops out that sounds like it needs changed (:


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