socialite
the e has an accent on top of it (don't know how to do it in USA keyboards)
For the rest, I agree with nair, the essay is solid but the last part (from My height has allowed me...) should be polished:
My height has also allowed me to be a socialite, in the sense that I am better seen; therefore, I am approached by people more often.
: this sentence's sense is confusing. The word
socialitĂŠshouldn't be used in that context (regrettably I can't offer you a better wording, so I'll just point out some "sense flaws")
lead me to become more courageous in the world.
: here it does not seem right to use the word "lead", I'd personally use "allowed". Also, you should be more specific about "more courageous in the world", rephrase and talk a bit more about it.
That's all I can do for now, good luck!!