nayelojello 5 / 37 2 Dec 31, 2012 #1WHY DO i WANT TO GO TO HOBART AND WILLIAMS?!?PLEASE CRITIQUE LIMIT 150 WORDS OR LESS I HAVE 151 WORDS.I believe that Hobart and William colleges is a perfect school for me because hunting down for colleges my junior year, I wanted a small liberal arts school where I can be challenged mentally and academically. Being exposed to challenges will provide me with baby steps to the real challenges that I would face in the real-world. With Hobart's pre-med program I will be able to experience what the medical field is really like.One of the goals that I want to fulfil while attending Hobart is being able to communicate more eloquently and master my writing skills. I believe that Hobart will aid me with this goal by providing me with rigorous writing classes. With the ability to communicate I know that when I apply to medical school I will be a candidate because of my background in internships at hospitals and my communication skills that Hobart provided me with.
acatam 1 / 4 1 Dec 31, 2012 #2I believe that Hobart and William colleges is a perfect school for me because [hunting down for colleges my junior year]i would delete this I wanted a small liberal arts school where I can be challenged mentally and academically. Being exposed to challenges will provide me with baby steps to the real challenges that I would keep the same tense throughout, e.g. use will here instead of would face in the real-world. With Hobart's pre-med program I will be able to experience what the medical field is really like.One of the goals that I want to fulfil while attending Hobart is being able to communicate more eloquently and master my writing skills. I believe that Hobart will aid me with this goal by providing me with rigorous writing classes. With the ability to communicate I know that when I apply to medical school I will be a candidate because of my background in internships at hospitals and my communication skills that Hobart provided me with.
dumi 1 / 6,925 1592 Jan 1, 2013 #3I believe that Hobart and William colleges is a perfect school for me because hunting down for colleges my junior year, I wanted a small liberal arts school where I can be challenged mentally and academically.Hobart and William colleges is a perfect school for me because I always looked forward to a small liberal arts school that would challenge me pscychologically and academically.Being exposed to challenges will provide me with baby steps to the real challenges that I would face in the real-world.------ hmmmm.... I guess this sentence does not have much value addition to your answer. It does not contain any new idea :(
OP nayelojello 5 / 37 2 Jan 1, 2013 #5thanks guys, it is due today. but other than that should I expand on something?
VVCepheiA 11 / 30 3 Jan 31, 2013 #6Be more specific! For instance, you can write about a specific program or couse that capture you!And the due day should be Feb 1st :)