For instance, because you wish to become a advocate for women and children, the fact that Smith is a women's college clicked in your case.
That's exactly what I want to say! Thanks, Wanderer_X!!
I will fix my first supplement essay right away. What do you think about second one?
Most imp, the prompt asks you to tell how did you "first learn" about Smith, nothing like why smith. So, your answer is somewhat out of topic.
But, they are also asking "WHY" am I applying to Smith, not just how I first learn about Smith. If I talk about why I like Smith do you think it is out of topic?
Thank you for your comment!