if I were you , I would not concentrate on just playing, I am sure you have other things to do for pleasure ...for example I would say, "I always read at least a national and a local newspaper every day. It is not a kind of thing I do it for pleasure, because these days the world's news are more painful rather than enjoyable; but I still have to be updated. Mostof the weekends my friends and I have some parties, where we dance and listen to music; dancing is good to relieve stress. I also enjoy going outdoors for pleasure. Some times I go window-shopping with my friends, and we go to a nice place to have a meal and chat. Also I enjoy doing different sorts of sport, like playing football, swimming and running. I am a member of my workplace's football team, although we are amateur players, we really enjoy the time we spend there playing. I think nothing can relieve your stress like having a sauna and massage. "
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I love bouncing different balls around my room in times when I can't go out.
I love bouncing balls against the wall when I have to stay indoors.
I just enter the grounds with my Nike's and play a random game
I just go to playground and play a random game
or else pack my gear and go to the pool
you should omit else
I like to take my Hypervenom to the field with a long drive on the way
I could not under stand this sentance
Listening to songs of different kinds form part of my major pleasure related activities
I we say " different types or genres of music"