SOP - The reasons to choose the university: employment upon graduation

Hey!!

Can you help me summarize the following points into a single paragraph? These points are the reason why I chose the respective university.

University details:
-Wholly postgraduate university-better focus on the courses
-Emphasis on applying knowledge in the industrial environment. Project work undertaken enables you to put the knowledge and skills gained from the taught element of the course into real-world practice while gaining transferable skills in project. Industry practitioners teach alongside our academic team on many of our programmes. Companies that have recruited and sponsored project work include:

1.IBM (Highly interested in this one)
2.Motorola
-Excellent employment prospects - 93% of our graduates gain relevant employment or go onto further study within six months of completing their degree. Our Careers Service can help you find the job you want after leaving Cranfield. While you are a student we will work with you to identify suitable opportunities and support you throughout the job application process. This help continues for up to three years after graduation.

-Our teaching quality has been independently assessed and received the highest commendation possible from the Quality Assurance Agency (QAA), giving you the assurance that your study will be of the highest standards.

-Our staff put a great deal of effort into connecting you with prospective employers and helping you find relevant employment upon graduation.

Well, this is an excellent start. Now you need to stare at it and get inspired. You are going to lead the reader in an experience -- a glimpse into the perspective of this girl who is hell-bent on excelling in her chosen field.

So decide what the first words will be as they begin to look at your essay.
The field of XXXXX is meaningful to me, because _________________. For the past six years I have been spending my free time reading about ________________. I know what kind of company I like, what I want to do, and what schools are able to get me there. In this paper, I am going to explain the reasons for my decision in favor of YYYYYYYYYYYY as my first choice...

Thanks a lot. But can you summarize those points for me into one paragraph?

Well I am not going to do it for you, or this site would be pointless. I want to help you to be able to do it.

Nail the reader with an unexpected word in the first sentence.
Express yourself like an inspired artist.

The field of XXXXX is meaningful to me, because _________________. For the past six years I have been spending my free time reading about ________________. I know what kind of company I like, what I want to do, and what schools are able to get me there. In this paper, I am going to explain the reasons for my decision in favor of YYYYYYYYYYYY as my first choice...

I gave you these blanks to fill in so that you can get started writing. You can do it!! And continue the paragraph by writing some of those points above...

let's see what you come up with...

:-)