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You sound terrible!; My Song Parodies: UVA Quirk


ChristianB 5 / 22 1  
Oct 30, 2013   #1
Hello! I'm submitting this tomorrow as one of my UVA supplements. I was hoping to get some last minute feedback on it. If you see any awkward sentences, grammar errors, etc., please let me know! The prompt asked me to share one of my quirks and describe how it contributes to who I am.

As I dive deeper into the daunting task of completing college essays, I find myself singing, "I believe I can try, I believe I can just apply! I dream about it every night and day, spread my wings and fly to UVA!"

"Christian, shut up." Abigail says. "You sound terrible, and your singing is completely unnecessary.
I certainly can't disagree with her about how I sound-my singing is indeed quite horrendous; however, singing parodies is actually very important to my sanity. Whenever I'm tired, stressed, anxious, busy, or uncreative, I simply create a song parody that perfectly fits my present situation. Doing this allows me to rejuvenate my energy and maintain my sanity throughout life's difficult moments. If I'm trying to stay up all night studying, coordinate a charity event, or anything in between, I break out into a cheesy song parody, and for some odd reason it helps me stay focused towards my goals. Yes, I know that it might seem somewhat pointless, but it works for me.

So, next year whenever you are woken up at 2:30am to the sound of a screeching cat, it's probably just me studying economics and singing, "Ah ha ha ha stayin awake, stayin awake!"
kaough 1 / 6  
Nov 1, 2013   #2
I don't know if you've already submitted this but i like it a lot and think it definitely answers the prompt and has a quirky style to match right up with the content but in the last since the use of second person sort of takes away from it

Besides that i think its great
dumi 1 / 6,925 1592  
Nov 5, 2013   #3
Whenever I'm tired, stressed, anxious, busy, or uncreative, I simply create a song parody that perfectly fits my present situation

Whenever I'm tired, stressed, feeling anxious or dull, I simply create a song parody to fit my emotions of the moment.

Doing this allows me to rejuvenate my energy and maintain my sanity throughout life's difficult moments.

.... I am suggesting you a bit different presentation for this idea;
Doing this allows me to rejuvenate my energy and achieve peace in mind to face any challenge in life.


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