In order to be a good actor, you must be able to pretend in a way that is as r
and making sure the show operates.
Above, what does it mean to operate? Don't say any meaningless things in this important essay!
play where all eyes are on me, and every applause is distributed to each actor by my portion is bigg er.
Sounds superficial, thirsting for attention. This is sort of a statement of the obvious, too, because the lead role always gets more attention.
Reflecting on both my roles would be unfair to describe me, because I wouldn't say I'm arrogant nor would I say I'm complacent or shy.----> it's good that you start talking about what they say about you, bcause that is what the essay is really supposed to be about. I suggest looking at the topic sentence ofr each paragraph and seeing if you can rewrite each topic sentence so that it is a sentence about what your roommate should know about you.