STATEMENT OF MOTIVATION AND EXPECTED ADMISSIONS METHOD ESSAY(WITHIN 300 WORDS) FOR USTH

I am applying to the University of Science and Technology of Hanoi to pursuit future career. In the following years, autonomous and automatics will play a crucial role in the future development of technology. It is noticeable that AI and Robotics will be the core technology in near future. Therefore, I plan to study the major of Mechatronics Engineering Technology to ensure a place for me in the growing demand of technology in various aspects of life. In near future, the development of these core technology will create thousands of job opportunities to those who work in the field of researching and developing AI as well as robotics engineering, with the representative of mechatronics engineering, which I am planning to study in the university. For the expected admissin method, I suppose that admission based on High school academic performance in combination with interview results will be most suitable to me. For the mechatronics subjects combination, my grade point average of Mathematics, Physics, and Informatics is 9.6, which I assume that is fairly appropriate for the major I choose.

This is a highly unusual motivational statement. It is both being informative but lacking in information at the same time. That is because you are using only commonly known information, without any true personal connection to your chosen major. The motivation is almost a cut and paste of currently available information. It is almost like it was written by Ai rather than by a serious college applicant. There is no personal motivation presented. You do not show a motivational history or development that the reviewer can refer to as being the reason why you want to pursue your chosen major. You later statement that shows uncertainty about your qualifications further threatens the credibility of your qualifications as a student. The reviewer will not take this application seriously in this presentation. He will disapprove your application as a potential student of their university.

@asyozu
Your statement needs more personal motivation and specific reasons for choosing USTH's Mechatronics Engineering Technology program (relevant experiences or skills), as well as improved structure and grammar.