a Thai ex-con missionary, an African child soldier, a French film director dying of cancer, and a tribal chief of Peru .
Great job on this because it summarizes the characters of your movie as well. :)
It seems more of a synopsis rather than a storyline. It didn't much tell about what has happened in your life. Try to go to the path where you tell specifics about the highlights of your life.
Take these as suggestions.. things to consider.
If you've got time, I'd appreciate any feedbacks on mine.