a) Strengths
i. Individuals can learn a new language easier. When a new international language is designed, more factors such grammars, vocabulary are taken into consideration. As a result, a new global language is not complicated any more.
ii. A new language has capability of avoiding the conflict among different nations. The new global language, which is easier to learn, encourages individuals to understand different nations.
iii. The new global language is more acceptable. Since it does not belong to any countries, it does not represent one certain country but the whole world.
b) Limits
i. It is costly. Most of materials and information for international business and researches are in English. If one new language is used, all of them would be translated in the new language, costing money and time.
ii. People have to readapt the new language. Due to a change in business and academic areas, individuals have to learn one new language with different vocabulary and grammars from English.
iii. The new global language is likely to endanger some languages. Since people's relying more on it contributing to the extinction of some languages, since they are not useful any more for business or academic purpose.
What is the prompt, exactly? and where are you applying? this format is risky, but if this is what they are asking for, then its great. What they are really looking for is usually your personal voice- not logic, or a reflective, impersonal philosophical piece, but what you sound like. They will already know you are smart by your grades and sat scores, but the actual personality needs to shine through in these essays, show them what you are like with all the facts and numbers taken out. You need to leave an impression on them, make them want to get to know you- this is a great and intelligent piece of writing with some clever ideas, but this essay is about YOU,and that doesnt show as much as it should.
You could mention that if a global language is implemented, it should only start with children from the age of 2, then build on that emerging generation so the current stability of other languages and the people who speak are not affected until the young generation has an influence on society. Doing this would allow for a smooth transition.
