'I was struck by the beauty of the campus' - why yale short answer

I was struck by the beauty of the campus when I went on a campus tour. The architecture is reminiscent of that seen in Oxford or Cambridge and reminded me of home. I could see myself at home at Yale. I felt welcomed by the lively, exciting admissions talks and video and I could imagine spending four years with those people. Yale also offers the chance to study engineering to an appropriate depth but still have a broad liberal arts education, making for a very well-rounded engineer.

Exactly how short is this short answer supposed to be? Because this is quite short!
I think you should mention something beyond the architect of Yale. The question is, "why Yale?" So you should
talk about what Yale has to offer or even better, what YOU have to offer to Yale. Stick with your writing style though! It's good!

If you could help me out with mine, I'd really appreciate it! It's still unanswered (the UVA supplement one).
Hope I helped!

The architecture is reminiscent of Oxford and Cambridge, reminding me of home.


I could see Yale being my new home.


I felt welcomed by the lively, exciting admissions talks and videos. I can imagine myself spending four years with such great people.

Overall, it's short, sweet, and to the point. Good luck!
Hope I helped. :)

500 characters and mine's 485. Thanks for your help! I'll have a look at yours :)