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'I will go with my stubbornness' - Upenn Intoduce Yourself


maroon5 9 / 57  
Jan 2, 2012   #1
Upenn: Best thing about yourself?
Junaid: I think I will go with my stubbornness.
Upenn: Worst thing?
Junaid: My sleeping habits definitely. And maybe also my inability to say "no" to others.
Upenn: Future ambitions?
Junaid: I am much more of a "present" person and don't want to create imaginary borders for myself. Heck, I even believe that I might land on the moon someday.

Upenn: Most intellectually enlightening moment?
Junaid: When I realized I could get dates by using the diminishing returns theory.
Upenn: Most passionate about?
Junaid: Everything I do really. If I do it, you can bet that I love it.
Upenn: Your favorite activity?
Junaid: Community service...Oh and smiling.
Upenn: Anyone you could switch lives with?
Junaid: I really like my life way too much to want to trade places with anyone.
Upenn: What matters most?
Junaid: Well I think just being happy matters the most. It's certainly what I strive for everyday and in everything I do.

I like it mostly; but i absolutely hate the last answer....i only had like 5 mins left and it's sooo cliche
THANKS for looking and i will return the favor
fizz 1 / 2  
Jan 2, 2012   #2
They are all good and the last one is fine as well!
can you help me with my essay as well!
jp4ever - / 4  
Jan 2, 2012   #3
Isn't this due already? It's very creative but it's also a challenge. It's likely that some people love your answer but some people don't
twizzlestraw 12 / 95  
Jan 2, 2012   #4
I like the idea. Its cute, but I feel like its a little underdeveloped. I agree with blackjack, you need to say something unique about yourself. Its almost like your describing an idealized person: "I love smiling, I love helping, I am passionate about everything I do, life is great because I make it that way". Which is all good and fine, but who wouldn't say that about themselves? Your responses make your unique idea ultimately cliche. Why don't you dig a little deeper with the last response and ask: what inspires you? why are you here? why are you applying? what is it that you want to accomplish at PENN? Show admissions officers the passion you claim you have..
crew12 3 / 5  
Jan 2, 2012   #5
I like it but I would change the one about really liking your life to much to change places with anyone. It's a good idea but the way you wrote it comes off badly.
lwest94 3 / 8  
Jan 2, 2012   #6
I agree that this could be hit or miss - depends on who's reading your application. But as long as you add in some details specific to you, I think that the person reading it might find it refreshing.
elephant1 2 / 16  
Jan 2, 2012   #7
I think for the community service part, you should say something more specific. Maybe a specific community service activity?

I really like it though.
mendoza123 1 / 8  
Jan 2, 2012   #8
i like your responses but i would suggest that you include someone who you would switch your life with. I think it shows who you admire and you could specify why you would change lives with that person. Other than that i think your responses were good and with a nice sense of humor.
insanesoul81994 10 / 30  
Jan 2, 2012   #9
I like your responses but I think you should be a little more specific, like the question on what youre most passionate about. Could you read mines? Thanks!


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