The overall component really flowed well, especially how you transitioned into speaking about how your background also influences your ability to be shy at times. The only thing I would suggest (maybe it's not that big of a deal) is to maybe give a couple examples on why you also feel happy about how others perceive you. Also, earlier in your response you mentioned
The people in my life haven't caused me pain
then you said
The way I am perceived causes me pain
. I think you should clarify on that a little.
Awesome job overall! :)