Take the challenge. Face your fears.Take the challenge! Beat your fears!
.... I changed punctuation too.
I realized the amount of audience that would be witnessing our performance and that left me full of anxiety.I realized the size of the audience that would watch our performance and I shuddered at the thought.
Unlike my friend, I had little to no experience when it comes to performing in front of peers, parents, and teachers.Unlike my friend, I suffered from stage phobia with nearly no experience in performing in front of an audience.
My whole body was shaking and there were "butterflies in my stomach" due to the unfamiliar environment. Nonetheless, the show must go on and I had to overcome my fear.
This is a bit over done :(
My whole body was shaking and there were "butterflies in my stomach" due to the unfamiliar environment. Nonetheless, the show must go on and I had to overcome my fear. Walking up on stage proved to be extremely difficult, but as soon I press the first note on the keyboard. I felt the hesitant and tense feeling just wash away. That was when I knew that I had overcome my fear with tenacity and perseverance.I was shivering with fear, nonetheless, I knew that the show must go on and I cannot let down others. I walked up on the stage with butterflies in my stomach. However, with greatest courage I set my fingers on the first note on the keyboard and then began to feel the tension was easing off. Soon I had myself connected with the show and finally I overcame my fear with tenacity and perseverance.