Tell us about who you are
How your family and friends and/ or members of your community describe you? If possible please include something about yourself that you are most proud of and why.
I believe I am the only teenager in my community who thinks something different unlike others.It's because since grade 12 I became aware of environmental destruction and overconsumption by humans of natural resources. This is the only reason I find too boring to find passion about some other hobbies like arts, tourism, club, parties etc. Because I believe that if people don't act now on fixing environmental issues, the rest of other jobs that humans often find pleasure wouldn't have any meaning. In my opinion, acquaintance on humans' wrongdoing or, wrath on nature is much needed. For my family and my community, especially the councilor of our local committee thinks I'm very shy in nature, thus I barricade myself into a single room. Thus I should join other activities which are common in our society.Well i do indulge such activities in meantimes with little interest. I'm also no longer part of a friend circle as according to them I'm weird. So the only friend i got is one of my best praisers. He thinks how ironically most of the people consider natural and animal welfare as a not-so-important subject but me. He is also my best encourager and tries to support me almost in everyway. He also stands by my side when me and other ' animal lovers' hold up protest on roads. He is the one who made me realize that apart from my study, my little contribution to environment should have my biggest pride.
This essay makes little sense and has no theme. I would suggest scrapping all the details on your friend group and personal life, instead focusing on your impact to the environment.
It's because since grade 12 ... -> Suddenly, in my 12th year of school I became aware of environmental destruction and human overconsumption of natural resources.
This is the only reason ... parties etc.
I would recommend just rewriting the essay and focus on what YOU can do about the environmental degradation you see.
Supantha, it is important that you understand what the prompt requirements are and how to deliver it. For this prompt, you cannot use the first person pronouns. The reason you cannot refer to yourself at all on a personal basis is because the prompt requires you to use a second or third person point of view in describing yourself. The description must come from how other people understand your personality, your strengths, and your weaknesses. That is why you are being asked to present that understanding based on 3 relationships. The reviewer needs to understand who you are as a child which will represent how you respond to authority / instructions / commands. The point of view of your friends will allow your application to indicate the sort of classmate and student community member you might be as a freshman. While the reference to your community member description will give the reader an idea as to the type of extra curricular activities you may enjoy and how you might be a positive contributing member to the student clubs and organizations. Adjust the essay to refer to yourself in the manner I explained so that the statement will become prompt responsive and allow you to deliver a better representation of yourself to the reviewer based on the required information.