You switch between past and present tense a lot in this essay. Pick one and stick with it. I recommend sticking to present tense, but that's just me.
They always tell me that they never would have I am bound to be rich in the future.
I'm not sure what you were trying to get at here, but this sentence doesn't make sense.
And when I order my food in Chinese at a Chinese restaurant the waiters are just as shocked. They tell me that they never would have expected me to be able to speak Chinese.
I like that you're using personal anecdotes in your essay but this one feels kind of random, like you just threw it in for fun. We know people are shocked when they find out you can speak Chinese; you told us that in the sentence before. Either tell us why this experience is different and important enough to have a special mention in your essay, or take it out.
I plan to always use Chinese in the future and I always want be connected to China, regardless of its economic status whether I am just a businessman in China or whether I am the Secretary of State who is visiting China to have a meeting with the president of China.
The emergence of China as a global super power has shaped my past, present, and will eventually shape my future.
This is kind of an awkward conclusion. I think you should just say that you want to continue to use Chinese wherever life may take you. You don't really need to say that you might be a businessman or Secretary of State or whatever. Keep it simple.
Overall, this essay is really strong. It's well written in general, although you have a few little erros that disrupt the flow. I'm not entirely sure what the prompt was since you didn't explicitly state it, but judging by your title I'm guessing it asked you to discuss an issue of importance and how it relates to you. If I'm right here, then I think you've half-answered the prompt. If your "issue of importance" is going to be China as a global superpower, then you should talk about China as a global superpower, why you feel this is an issue, and why you feel it is important. If you add in stuff about that, then you'll be golden.