Theatre Volunteering- Common App Extracurricular Expand...

Growing up in the YES Theatre program offered at my Elementary and Middle Schools, it was only natural for me to volunteer for YES in high school when I could no longer perform in the plays. In the last three years, I have taken on roles as assistant choreographer, director, and producer for various plays at my old Elementary School. Through my experience working in the theatre company, I have learned how to effectively work with kids, become a better public speaker, handle more responsibility and act as a leader contributing to the success of the production as a whole. While I know that I do not wish to pursue acting in my future, my participation in this drama program from a devoted participant to an eager intern has provided me with an incredible community as well as many valuable lifelong skills.

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