cindykins 3 / 4 Dec 29, 2010 #1Hey. I would love some feedback on this short essay. Thanks in advance!The question is why I choice my major.Movies to me are therapeutic. When ever I have a fight with my parents, or fail an exam or just flat out have a bad day, I turn to a movie. I forget all of my problems with fun movies like Home Alone, Ferris Bueller's Day Off, and the Breakfast Club. I love how movies make you feel like you are a part of the story, and help you forget anything troubling for an hour and a half. So for me having a career in movies would not only be a dream come true but it would be a stress relief. Thus, my first choice major at Emerson is Media Studies. I would concentrate on producing. I know that with the help of Emerson College I will be able to bring more successful films to the world.
asolayman 3 / 11 Dec 30, 2010 #2wheneverMovies are therapeutic. they know its your opinion, no need to say " to me"i dont think its best to say you fight with your parents lol, rather you can say when you find yourself in an argument..Home Alone, Ferris Bueller's Day Off, and the Breakfast Club seem to just disolve all of my problems.having a career in movies would not only be a dream come true but it would be a stress relief- better than any zen dvd's or rock gardens I've ever seen.^the end of that sentence is just a suggestion, it just kinda seemed like a natural fit in the sentence and just came to me lolThus, my first choice major at Emerson is Media Studies with a concentration on producing.like i said just suggestions, but the content is good
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129 Jan 19, 2011 #3To me, movies are...---that is how I would do it.Whenever I have a fight with my parents, fail an exam, or just flat ...I love how movies make you feel like you are a part of the story (no comma necessary here) and help you forget ...I think you should add one more theme. Film is about more than escapism. It combines all the other arts.:-)
