Hi Devin, welcome to EssayForum!
Welcome to you, too, Beth. Beth, I am trying to let everyone know it is better if you edit individual sentences instead of pasting the whole essay. That helps us in a few different ways and forces the student to interact with the edit, possible improving her or his grammar. So please paste individual sentences that need corrections.
And thanks for participating!
I believe there are many facets that shape your life.
I think this will be the wrong use of "facet." A facet is an aspect of something, not particularly useful for shaping anything.
BUT you can write about facets of your life. That would be a good use of the word.