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Transfer admission essay for Georgia Tech. I need help forming an excellent essay which I lack of.



JuanSebastianR 23 / 54  
Jan 28, 2016   #1
Georgia Tech Application for Transfer Admission

Please limit your essay to 2000 characters, which includes spaces and punctuation.

Short Answer 1

What interests you about your selected program of study?

Aerospace Engineering is a broad field that can translate into many careers. However, my passion for space exploration has grown within the last few years. With this degree, I will be able to become an expert in aerodynamics and propulsion to engineer the next best aircraft that can travel as fast as the speed of light, which would take us the farthest distances in space.

When I was a child, I used to gaze at the stars high above and say, "They are unreachable." Little did I imagine that I could someday be able to get closer to those stars. During my whole college career I have been undecided about what I wanted to do with my life. I didn't find my passion until one day I was told by a friend to follow the signs. I was always amazed by space exploration and saw the vastness of it and put it in a pedestal. It was so unimaginable and almost untrue that it began to become a reality when I began learning about astronauts such as Neil Armstrong.

This program not only interests me to build better aircraft here on Earth, but I want to be a part of companies such as SpaceX, who have now landed their first rocket vertically to save money for future space travel.

I believe there is another earthlike planet out there in the universe. With recent discoveries such as Kepler 652 and other planets that are in the similar distance within their sun star, it gives me hope that there are other planets like ours surrounding other stars.

Finding another of another planet will get us closer to knowing the essence of our existence in the universe. Perhaps we will meet other life systems that are far more advanced. Perhaps there are other worlds that have not been habited and that are able to sustain human life. Perhaps there are many more worlds that will answer our questions as to how we came exist.

There is another world out there, and it is my dream to engineer the next system that can find another Earthlike planet before our time here on Earth runs out.
vangiespen - / 4031  
Feb 3, 2016   #2
Juan, you need to better direct your opening statement in order to properly respond to the prompt. So here is my suggested introduction for you:

I look to the skies and planets beyond our immediate galaxy for my studies in Aerospace Engineering. Inspired by the successes of Niel Armstrong and SpaceX, I wish to pursue a career that will allow me to help our space program develop to the point where space travel will become as ordinary as riding a car, just that my developed vehicles will travel light years into space, reaching new human settlements on Mars and Kepler 652. This is the dream that I hope to turn into a reality through the study of this program.

That is 512 words in total. Use the remaining word count to explain your vision for space travel in the next paragraph and then relate the development of that vehicle to your interest in this program. Basically, you have to explain how this program, through research and future study, will allow you to help man settle in other worlds. That is the vision you have and that is the reason for your interest in this program of study. Don't hesitate to let me know if you need help in developing the latter part as well. I'm here to help.


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