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Travel enthusiast; People I like to get to know better and why?


Nathanblaze 1 / 1  
Dec 27, 2012   #1
Please I'd like you to review this. I'd appreciate your suggestions. Thankyou
QUESTION: What place, people, or culture would you like to get to know better and why?
As a travel enthusiast, I have met many people of different backgrounds but most of them were my country people. This was my first time when I met some Americans at Bandipur, Nepal. They were very energetic climbing high hills. Well at first I was little reluctant to start the conversation but as I started conservation with one of the American, the conservation lasted for almost an hour. They were very frank. Since they were visiting our country for the first time, they admired our landscapes. Due to this, now, I have an enormous interest in observing and getting to know more about the people from other countries.

I am glad to have met those tourists because they taught me a lot. At the past I wasn't the person, who liked to talk with strangers but having met these Americans, now I'm not afraid to talk with any strangers. I'd like to meet similar kind of people who are very frank to express their views without hesitations. Every day of our lives we will be required to interact with another person or many people which is also a part of getting education as we get to know about their cultures, way of living. Also our communication skills get improved. To me, meeting new people especially foreigners is great opportunity because I always like to evolve myself and I think meeting these people will enhance my skills. I believe I'll know about my hidden or unknown qualities of mine as well.
shadow_master 3 / 4  
Dec 28, 2012   #2
I think the meaning you are trying to express is good but it's not effective. You do not fully express why meeting strangers is so important to you.

And there are several gramatical mistakes...
OP Nathanblaze 1 / 1  
Dec 28, 2012   #3
Thanks. What should I include then?
Please


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