allathlete5 5 / 19 Dec 14, 2009 #1Prompt: Please tell us more about your interest in Brown: Why does Brown appeal to you as a college option? Who or what has influenced your decision to apply?1000 CharactersI used the diverse programs and classes offered at my high school to narrow my academic interests to a single, apparent category. I came to find that I love computers. The incorporation of my two favorite subjects, math and science, fascinates me, and it creates challenges that I love. There is a certain type of excitement that comes with computers that creates in infatuation.The prestigious and world renowned programs and professors that Brown University is known for will help craft those infatuations into something more. To craft these infatuations I will need more then an average education, and Brown University will craft my interests into lifelong passions.I have been influenced by the tremendous opportunities Brown has to offer. The distinguished professors and eminent programs present me an immeasurable amount of opportunities. I look forward to to using Brown's distinguished programs and eminent professors to change my infatuations into something more, into a love and a career that I will be paid for what I love doing.Okay so basically this is a short answer supplemental for Brown. I have put a few sentences of my other essays together. Do you think it hits the prompt? Are there any mistakes? Do you have any suggestions for grammar, structure, or anything else?? All help would greatly be appreciated! =)Also, I added that last long sentence in just because I was at about 820 characters, but I'm not sure if it adds to the essay.. If it makes sense.. or if i should keep it.. Let me know what you think!!!