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I am truly blessed ; Drexel BS/MD Supp


tutu51595 6 / 19 3  
Dec 21, 2012   #1
I have been lucky enough to have never been rushed to an emergency room, or carried away in an ambulance. I have been lucky enough to receive a great education and to live in a country that recognizes me for who I am and not for my race, my sex, or my religion. I have also been lucky enough to belong to a family that supports my dreams and urges me to be the best that I can be. I understand that I am truly blessed but I also understand that there are so many less lucky than I. My life has not been easy but I have met people in this country and in others who make the worst day I've ever had seem like heaven. Because of this, I have realized it is my duty to give back to others, and the best way I can possibly do that is by positively impacting the most important aspect of their lives, which is their health. I am fully dedicated to my goal of becoming physician. Each of us only has one chance at a beautiful life. By dedicating my life to healing others and helping them make the most of the time they have on this earth, I will have succeed.

I am applying to the joint programs with Drexel University College of Medicine because I have been reminded time and time again that the road to a medical degree is in no way shape or form an easy one. The institution at which I will pursue my dreams must be one of the best. An environment that will aid me in all my academic endeavors and provide me with great opportunities in and out of school. I have researched many colleges and universities and with this medical school's impressive: list of medical programs, graduation rate, resources for a medical education, beautiful campus, and positive things I've heard from others, I know Drexel University College of Medicine is the best place for me. I am positive that any of the combined degree programs at the affiliated schools will set me up with a spectacular education and leading opportunities to help me achieve my goal. There is no other institution where my aspirations would be better served than at Drexel University College of Medicine.
StephR 4 / 14 1  
Dec 21, 2012   #2
It sounds pretty good, I liked how you started it
SAChedal 1 / 2  
Dec 21, 2012   #3
You wrote real well. You might want to reconsider this sentence though , My life has not been easy but I have met people in this country and in others who make the worst day I've ever had seem like heaven. . It sounds a little less professional than the other sentences. Good Luck!


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