UIC has unassailably proven that throughout its seven-year history

It would be a lie when not say every school is unique. And Underwood International College, an affiliate college of Yonsei University, is no exception. In my own perspective, I hold the strong belief that UIC's history makes that unmistakable difference. "Established in 2006?! Seriously, it's not old enough to have that kind of prominent annals" is what my best friend commented. However, new is always better. And UIC has unassailably proven that throughout its seven-year history. That is also the reason why I choose UIC to continue my journey to a new summit of knowledge.

As a senior in high school, I consider UIC as where I can challenge myself in a very different multicultural and multinational English educational environment which will give me a opportunity not only to interact with people from all winds at backgrounds over the world but also to gain what I really need for my future from the ocean of knowledge. Furthermore, I do believe that I will be provided the high-level education with lectures from the best scholars in the academic areas and have a chance to experience social activities and contribute my youth to college voluntary

During high school I've experienced variety of social activities from debating, orientating our high school's freshmen, helping disabled children etc... and tried my best so as to get my goals in both study and private life. Thanks to these activities, I realized I was interested in the relationship among people, international and global issues and the diversity in languages so International Studies (IS) would be a great choice for me. And as a potential IS student in UIC, I can affidavit that I will dedicate all my ability, youth energy to UIC's study tradition and reputation .

Make sure you include the prompt in your post so that we know what it expects from you.


Well.... for me, this sentence does not add any value to your response.


Why? You need to justify why you claim so!


Give some examples, otherwise the reader would not be convinced.

Also, you should have a more meaningful topic in the subject filed when you open a new thread. It is the forum rule and please follow that rule in your future threads.

Thank you very much .
Sorry for this inconvenient :))
This is my essay I'll apply for UIC which limits less than 250 words to tell about the reason i choose and what i think this university is unique and what i can contribute.

Plz help me correct the grammar and add some ideas to improve it
Thanks a lot.

No issue at all... follow the rule next time :D


.... OK :)


... I am repeating my previous question - Why is new better than old? You need to justify with at least one reason :D .... and that reason should be one that you find in UIC. I also think this provides you a good opportunity to start answering the question. What this new institution offers you that other oldies do not? Answer that question well and I am sure that helps you make a good response :)

It would be lying to not say that every school is unique.


Seems rather forced. I think you should give concrete examples in your following sentence and it should be fine then.


I realize that I am interested

Could you help with mine?