I created my own Facebook Page specifically to post the naive questions I encounter while pondering about nature.
I created my own Facebook Page specifically to post the naive questions, while I encounter pondering about nature.
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This sentence has poor structure.
It provides many intriguing questions that are humble and yet have answers that can only be arrived at through scientific endeavor.Hello Jawad, in my view your essay is not have good enough coherence and cohesion, it is the pattern which is usually used by me.
Essay pattern:
1. Intoduction : (paraphrasing title with hook to persuade readers are more curiously to read more and you have mention thesis statements which are defined in the body)
2. Body 1 : Detail explanation of thesis statement 1
3. Body 2 : Detail explanation of thesis statement 2
4. Additional information (writer opinion or additional information which relate with thesis statements
5. Conclusion