The vice president of the club was supposed to help lessen the work,
complications from the club to ruin our friendship,
ruin our friendship so I half-heartedly managed most of her tasks and the majority of the meeting agendas,
Maybe you shouldn't use
half-heartedly.
why I would be the better president, she still won.
, and so I quit
election I realized that Ifif this never happened I never would
I learned is how important it is to build relationships and, regardless of
Great essay! As for the tone of the second paragraph, it sounds ok, but maybe you shouldn't use the word
half-heartedly. It doesn't sound like you're bitter at the vice-president, because you said you didn't want to ruin your friendship by confronting her about it. Good work!