hey, first I want to say Sapna gets the Best Username Award.
Bret, lately I have been playing stuff in drop D but with all 6 strings a half step down. Makes me feel tough, because it is so deep and relentless. You should try it! :-)
Complex emotions flow out of my body and suddenly they don't seem so complicated.
I hope you learn about Chinese Medicine so you can see how different kinds of energy give rise to different kinds of emotions, and how your music lets emotions take form (i.e. just like dreams) so you can give expression to them.
view on reality--- view of, perspective on, but not view on
This sentence is very cool:
Its twisted tone clatters my bones and rattles my brain which resides inside of my skull.
But the end has got to go:
Its twisted tone clatters my bones and rattles my brain.
which resides inside of my skull .
Oh, I see where Yoda mentions it got boring.. Well, that is the thing... it stays on one subject for too long. However, I think you have the solution here. A COLLEGE essay has to show how committed you are to your plan. Some people have no plan, and that is too bad, because they cannot be as impressive...
I want you to use the discussion of your music as a metaphor for your envisioned professional work. Your work as a professional is music, too... (especially if you major in psych and become a music therapist)
So, compound the theme of this by making it so that it is not even about guitar. Make it so that the whole discussion of music is necessary in order to express your career outlook.