UNITED AIRLINES EMPLOYEES DEPENDENTS on educational and career goals & objectives

QUESTION: Explain to us your educational and career goals, and objectives.

Does this meet the requirments so far? it has to be under 200 words and I believe this is 15 over. I know it needs some serious editing and grammer but any help. My brain is so fried from working on scholarships :(

Our bodies are the perfect science, each working in sync towards a common goal in supreme performance. I have been driven further the growth of my goals on being a sports psychologist. By pursuing this will be involving myself to explore different fields of experience, enabling me to assist others to communicate and engage in activities. I want to learn how to help these athletes understand how to be aware and in control of their body and mind, to obtain a peak performance. My mission is trying to understand the human kinetics and the psychological factors that affect performance in sports, and physical exercise, to me this is absolutely fascinating and drives my eagerness to study and research the psychological effects on the body. From this I plan to seek a position at Nike's because of their values, and not just their desire, but also mine as well to increase motivation and performance from these athletes. Nike fosters the growth of the individual to explore their potential and push each one of us athletes or not to our boundaries to succeed. I want to be able to research and grow under top professionals so I too can go back into my community and offer support and opportunity for those who are in need of assistance.

Our bodies are the perfect science, each all working in sync towards a common goal in supreme performance. I have been am driven further the growth of my goals on being a sports psychologist. say something specifric, simple, and clear.

By pursuing this I will be involving myself to explore in different multiple fields of experience, enabling me to assist and helping others to communicate and engage in activities.

Excellent. It might be good to mention relevant current events or recent books or research articles you have been reading. Also, separate it into 2 paragraphs so it is easier to read. :-)