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"Unity in Diversity" - How to become a good candidates for GLOBAL UGRAD ESSAY



Dhani_ja23 1 / -  
Nov 3, 2024   #1
Hi! Kindly help me if it is needed to be revised or any advice will highly be appreciated thank you (2024)

"Bhineka Tunggal Ika," or "Unity in Diversity," isn't just a fancy phrase for Indonesia. It is like our country's special identity. It means we are all unique, yet we maintain a strong bond. This notion of everyone getting along and respecting one other's backgrounds and ideas made me consider how essential communities are in my own life including leadership. Leadership is important in Indonesia's "Unity in Diversity" slogan. It acts as a bind that unites people from diverse backgrounds. This made me understand how closely communities and leadership are linked. For me, A community is not just a group of people; it's a team that fosters friendships, understanding, and collaboration.
My journey into the whole community thing started in a small village. I used to be an introvert who believed that no one listened to what I expressed. I did not have many friends, and I was undependable. I was aware that I had thoughts and ideas, but they were trapped within me. So I decided to push myself out of my comfort zone and join a community. Being a part of a group was like finding a comfortable place to grow as we can learn, share, and evaluate together in terms of leadership. It wasn't just about having friends, it helped me grow personally. We share our thoughts. One moment I remember when I led the guest lecturing becoming a master of ceremony in front of a lot of students. It was a big deal because I not only got to share my ideas but also earned the trust of others to pull off the event successfully. But at least I'm becoming dependable. By Doing stuff in the community like workshops and events. It taught me how to solve problems, manage time, and talk to people. Realizing how communities can change lives, I wanted to give back. Volunteering with "I am Polyglot Indonesia," I tutored at a local youth center. It made me more conscious of the difficulties that people face and encouraged me to do more. I'm intrigued to push myself to become responsible in my community, for instance, the moment when I conducted the national event talk about the "Education series" I was the one who faced the barriers to persuading the participants to join the national seminar and look for the speaker to continuity even though the participants who joined were in minimum but I'm pretty sure by facing that condition, I become more aware that holding some big event is not that easy and not always successful. So, I'm thinking about joining UGRAD as It corresponds to my goal of becoming a better community member and improving my skills in various aspects of their work, By joining UGRAD, I hope that I will learn about different cultures by being involved and contribute in the U.S. communities during the program. Looking ahead, I want to be a force for good by being an enthusiastic person and standing up for everyone in being involved in the community. My dedication to the community stems from my belief that when various individuals work together, incredible things can happen no matter what they belong. I am sure that UGRAD will assist and facilitate my growth.
Ultimately, For me, A community isn't simply a place to seek help, it's also a place to provide growth and create a future in which everyone is included. I'm convinced that the best communities aren't just about leaders but about teamwork where people from all over come together and make things awesome. And this is linked with my nation's slogan, which is Bhineka Tunggal Ika.

Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15439  
Nov 3, 2024   #2
While your discussion about your growth and development as a community leader is admirable, you have missed out on one important aspect of the discussion. While you are looking forward to what the Global UGrad program can impart ot you in terms of knowledge and skills development, you have not considered what you can bring to the table to share with the other participants. What makes you stand out as a person? As a leader? As a citizen of the world? Sure you have all of these experiences within your community, but how would you translate that into a bigger scale? How would you apply these to make the program more diverse and active for the incoming batch of participants? Try to shorten the leadership story within your community. Expand on it based on the international platform that would be needed for the Global UGrad program.


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